Sunday, May 10, 2009

Akhiri Khwaish...

11 comments:

M.A.Sharma "सेहर" said...

Rajat ji

kahan se itna dard samet lete hain aap apni abhivyakti main ??

shabdon ke aabhaav main ...

simply amazing !!!!

SAHITYIKA said...

itna kasht?? ye sifr kavita hai.. yaa sachmuch hi man k bhavon ki abhivayakti hai??

raj said...

mushkil se padha jata hai.....par achha likha hai...uski aahat meri kabar par jalta diya buja degee

AlbelaKhatri.com said...

kya baat hai guru?
itna dard saha rahe ho?
kuchh lete kyon nahi?
MERI BADHAIYAN HI LELO.......

Shama said...

"Mera reguzar inhee rahonpe
shaamli hun dardme tere,
"shamm" kee dua hai,
koyi diya na bujhe
jalee aake, khudke mazaarpe"

Qabile tareef hai ye khoobsoorat rachnaa..
shama

रवीन्द्र दास said...

itni berukhi khyon hai ji?

अमिताभ श्रीवास्तव said...

dardyukt abhivyakti///// ab bataiye ise kese bahut khoob kahu??kisi dard par taarif karna????kese//

manu said...

sunder likha hai rajat ji,,,
bahut badhiyaa,,,,,,

अनिल कान्त : said...

ise padhvane ke liye shukriya
maza aa gaya

Scorpion King said...

"Maine intezaar kiya tha uska aakhri saans tak" Ultimate poetry, gumon ki charam seema pe pahunchna bhi ek tarah ki kamyaabi hai jise paana har kisi ke bas ki baat nahin. Apni saans ke aakhri saans hone ki khwahish hi sab kuchh bayan kar deti hai aur kuch kehne ko baaki hi kahaan rehta hai.
Beutiful ....

sakhi with feelings said...

har sher me aah hai dard hai...dard ki intehaa hi likhne ko majboor kar dtei hai taki wo bahar a asake hai na??
kahi aisa hai kya kuch...

dard pe daad nahi deti me to is bar bhi nahi dungi
baki apka blog dekh kar hardik khush hui...