Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Hara Nahi Hun....

19 comments:

Ashish said...

Just marvelous

Thanks

AlbelaKhatri.com said...

bhai rajatji, kamaal karte ho, har bar anand se bhar dete ho apne pathkon ko=================
BAHUT BAHUT BADHAI

*KHUSHI* said...

wah... Rajat, aap accha likhte hai, yaha pahli baar aana huaa, aur aap bhi meri tarah images mai kavita likhte hai, accha laga. aapka hsukriya, hamare blog pe aaye aur comment bhi diya.

raj said...

aap en udas ankho pe na jaye....aaj main kuchh thak gya hun hara nahi.....very touching....

महावीर said...

rachna ka andaz-e-bayan aur lafzon ka chunaao dono bahut khubsoorat hain.
aakhri panktion mein khaskar bahut hi bhavuk chitran hai aur yeh tasveer - sone mein suhaaga ka kaam karti hai.
badhayi!

महावीर शर्मा

SAHITYIKA said...

very nice.. :)

Manish Kumar said...

achcha likha hai aapne aur chitra ke sath kavita prastut karne ka andaaz bhi khoob laga.

Bas kuch lafzon ko sudhar lein
निरंतर
डूबना

SWAPN said...

rajat , pahle to tumhen dhanyawaad karta hun mere blog par padharne aur comment ke liye.

chita ke upar likhit tumhari yah sunahri kavita vakai lajawaab hai, badhai sweekaren.

mere blog par punah padharen swagat hai.

विनय said...

आपके ब्लॉगिंग का अंदाज़ निराला है

sandhyagupta said...

Bahut khub.Badhai.

Nirmla Kapila said...

्रजत जी कहते हैं नाघर के भाग्य दरवाजे से ही नज़र आ जाते हैं आज पहली बार ब्लोग पंर आयी हूँ एक दम समझ गयी कि सही जगह आयी हूं क्यों कि जो बच्चे नहीं हर्ने की बत कर्ते हैं वो मुझे बहुत अच्छे लगते है बहुत ही सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति है ब्लोग भी सुन्दर है आशीर्वाद्

Shamikh Faraz said...

rajat ji aapki is kavita ki jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai. main aapse guzarish karta hun k aap chahe to mere blog par b ye kavita bhej de kyonki mera blog aesi hi kavitato aur logo k lie hai jo hare na ho. kabhi waqt mile to mere blog par aayen.

MUFLIS said...

है मुझे एहसास.... कि आने वाला कल
होगा कुछ ख़ास
दुनिया होगी क़दमों में है मुझे विश्वास

आस्था और विश्वास को प्रतिविम्बित करती हुई
ख़ास रचना ........
हर क़दम , हर पहलु ....एक ख़ास अभिव्यक्ति
बधाई
---मुफलिस---

Scorpion King said...

Its a beutiful poetry. Words always have mor meanings tahn they actualy have. Ummeed ki Ummed to har jung mein kayam rehni hi chahiye phir chahe zindagi rahe ya na rahe

Purvi said...

Very well written Rajatji...

............Purvi................

abhay said...

jindgi ne haraya hain bahut baar ,magar haar na manege hum
jindgi jeena ka andaj isse behtar aur kya hoga

bahut khub, lagta hain ,
is dil main samanderki laher bahut shant hain
bas sahil ko dekh ke takrana nahi bhulti
very nice poem wrote by you
keep it up

sakhi with feelings said...

rajat ji
man moh liya is bhav ne. jo is rachna mein hai..bina haare jina bahut achi baat hai..
aur umeed hai ye har waqt jeevan me lagoo hoti hogi

सागर said...

bahut khoob rajat bhai......likhte raho!

shubhkamnayein.......

Anonymous said...

Great post, I am almost 100% in agreement with you