Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Yeh bhi Koi baat hue....

13 comments:

शरद कोकास said...

सही है यह भी कोई बात हुई ?

Udan Tashtari said...

उम्दा रचना!

ashok suryavedi said...

nice poem ...
ye bhi koi baat huyee.

Dimps said...

Hi Rajat,

You have stated everything so truly..! Hats off!
Brilliant usage of good words and punctuations & I could draw the entire picture :)

The concept and the topic... so near to reality. Nice thought process!
So much pain is portrayed and you have mentioned the truth of life but still we have to live it :)

Harr kadam pe zindagi mazaak udaati hai mera,
Par kya karu main harr baar yehi kehti hu "main kuch bigaad nahi sakti tera"

Keep up the good work!

Regards,
Dimple
http://poemshub.blogspot.com

arun c roy said...

bahut sunder ! aam zindgi me aisa hi hota hai....jasb jiski chahat hoti hai nahi milti... jiwan ki vivashta aur vyashta ki khoobsurat abhivyakti !

Ashish (Ashu) said...

भाई मजा आ गया..सच कहा यह भी कोई बात हुई

sangeeta swarup said...

बहुत गज़ब कि लिखी है..ये भी कोई बात हुई.....बधाई

*KHUSHI* said...

wah.. ye bhi kya baat hui... sundar rachana..

Anonymous said...

kya baat hai! aap ne har ek insaan ke ehsas to sabdoon ko itna pyaar jaama udaaya hai ki kya kahe... bahut khub

aap ki rachna mein ek tazagi nazar aati hai, har rachna ka vastvikta se itna nazdeek ka rishta lagta hai.

Keep up the good work..you have a talented pallet of thoughts...

~anjaane~

Anonymous said...

kya baat hai! aap ne har ek insaan ke ehsas to sabdoon ko itna pyaar jaama udaaya hai ki kya kahe... bahut khub

aap ki rachna mein ek tazagi nazar aati hai, har rachna ka vastvikta se itna nazdeek ka rishta lagta hai.

Keep up the good work..you have a talented pallet of thoughts...

~anjaane~

Yatish said...

ज़िन्दगी को जब भी कोई एक अनोखे अंदाज मे देखता है तो बहुत सकूँ मिलाता पड़कर.
दर्द पर मरहम लगजाता. कुछ ऐसा ही आपकी रचनाओं में...
जारी रहे या सफ़र यूँही ऐसी उम्मीद लिए
शुभकामनायें
यतीष

हिमान्शु मोहन said...

इतनी सुन्दर रचनाएँ, और हमने अब तक पढ़ी नहीं
तीनों सच्ची बातें लगें, कि जी होंगी मनगढ़ी नहीं
आकर धोखे से ही पहुँचे, पर ये आना सौगात हुई
रजत लिखे अच्छा,लगता है अब जाकर के बात हुई!

$ChiTas$ said...

sachmuch har kavita padh kar main apne aap ko rok nahi paati comments diye bina.

Bahot hi khaas rachna hai ye...har kavita arth se bhari hui hai.

-Chaitali Jagtap